Nice...
...but I'm sure you're aware it can be so much better! :D
1. Where's the bass? I'm sure you know this, the kick is very weak, almost non-existent.
2. Sounds tinny...where are the mids?
3. Mastering, very much needed especially for the higher frequencies.
Other than those points, this song's structure as well as melodies are quite something else, very enjoyable. Not quite sure if you're going to keep working on this song...wouldn't mind seeing the final product!
4/5
7/10
Keep up the good work! Awaiting the other two projects you're working on!
Kazmo