Pretty wicked!
I really like the bass, I know you didn't make it, but that's ok XD, it's the pattern, not the sound. :P
The chord progressions are nice, and I really like the pad in the background.
I dunno what you did rhythm wise, it almost sounds like a prefab hat loop in the background. ;]
The lead is wicked, and the melody is awesome.
It does seem to go on for a while, I won't lie. It sounded like the song was ending at 4:10.
The latter part of the song, needs some work
Overall though, this song is good, of course there is room for improvement. It doesn't need a lot, just some polishing up, and balancing in the latter part of the song. :]
Keep it up!!!
8/10
5/5
Kazmo